Being the devil's advocate on the three shots to date: I don't like the green in either of the last two shots. I'm wondering if you might be better off not worrying about the triangle of white and black. Maybe consider removing the awning back to the metal pole and just filling that in? That would take it out where it's splitting her head at her eyes, quite possibly reducing that area of distraction.I'm fine with a textured shot, just not the green.
This is my favorite of the three Steve. I get what Doug is saying but I just happen to be a fan of the cross-processed look.I like the original shot you posted as well. The blown out sky doesn't really bother me since your exposure on the model was perfect as far as I can tell.Well done!Barry